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13 September 2004 @ 01:22 am
SV fic: Of Epistles and Epiphanies  
I'm as shocked as you are. No, really.

Title: Of Epistles and Epiphanies
Pairing: Clark/Lex
Spoilers: None


Of Epistles and Epiphanies.Collapse )
 
 
Current Mood: accomplished
Current Music: Here Comes Your Man - Pixies
 
 
 
You're no rock n roll fun: Bad Porn Lex (by runpunkrun)saturnalia on September 15th, 2004 08:11 am (UTC)
“I was seventeen! Everyone’s self-centered when they’re seventeen!”

Um, hi! Seventeen-year-old here. I feel like I should be insulted. *g*

Very nice story; I love the way you split the email text up in between Clark's actions. Kind of like he could only accept one little bit at a time- it took him that long to go from "Look, he's sending me drunk email, what a jerk!" to "I love you". (Or almost.)

Plus, I'm just a sucker for post-rift fic in general. Even after the show ends I think I can keep myself occupied for a long time by plotting how to get our woobies back together again.
pure FORESHADOWING: Chloe!nifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:12 pm (UTC)
*laughs* No insult intended! I'm sorry! *waves hands really placatingly* Eeek!

But, I'm glad that you enjoyed this -- *laughs* age-ism notwithstanding. *snugs* Thank you!
The Alpha Betadiluvian on September 15th, 2004 01:31 pm (UTC)
This was awesome. I loved the pacing, spreading out the correspondence with Clark's thoughts.

One small thing speedbumped me, though:

he can smell Lex’s aftershave

Um, Lex doesn't shave.

Other than that, take all those comments above and apply "What she said!" to each and every one.
pure FORESHADOWING: brad sexnifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:13 pm (UTC)
Oh -- I just meant aftershave in terms of the way a lot of men use it in lieu of cologne, because it's got a lighter, sharper smell. But, you're right, he sure doesn't! Anyway, glad you liked the story! *bounces*
lynn221 on September 15th, 2004 06:09 pm (UTC)
I just loved how Clark kept talking to himself - wonderful!!!!!!
Thank you so much!!!!:0) Love how you write!!!!
pure FORESHADOWING: Clark RHPSnifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:13 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you! *snugs* Thank you so much!
lastscorpion on September 15th, 2004 07:33 pm (UTC)
Oh! How lovely! I love this version of Clark, and this story so much!
pure FORESHADOWING: fabio!clarknifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:14 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you! *snugs* Yay!
Adoable Frunk: textually renderlyra_sena on September 15th, 2004 07:34 pm (UTC)
at this point, baby? I'm only commenting to be #50. *grins*

You already know I love this. Wonderful work, sweetness.

pure FORESHADOWING: brad sexnifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:15 pm (UTC)
Aww, my magic number 50. *snugs you*
Nasraninasrani on September 16th, 2004 01:03 am (UTC)
Wonderful, *wonderful* story pacing and great ending. I love the slipping of Lex's email snippets throughout the fic and people's reaction towards Clark's indignanat outbursts.
pure FORESHADOWING: charisma!nifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:16 pm (UTC)
*grins* I love Indignant!Clark. Also, Dogma. *snugs your icon and you*

Thank you so much, though! I'm really happy you liked this!
Cearesceares on September 16th, 2004 12:56 pm (UTC)
Wow!
This didn't go through the first time I think, so forgive me if it's a double post. This was just terrific. Funny, sweet, angsty and totally the way it should turn out-not to mention containing one of the most beautiful love letters I've ever read.
pure FORESHADOWING: broken supermannifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:17 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow!
Wow, thank you so much. *laughs* I didn't really think of the email as a love letter, but yeah, I guess it does kind of work that way. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Sarahgiddyfangirl on September 16th, 2004 10:16 pm (UTC)
EEEEEEOMGSQUEESOGOODBRAINSHUTTINGDOWN.

*flails*
pure FORESHADOWING: Clark RHPSnifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:18 pm (UTC)
*squees at your flailage and dances around you*
DarkEmeraldsemeraldsedai on September 17th, 2004 02:11 pm (UTC)
A beautiful, beautiful fic, Nifra. I haven't read all the zillions of other comments, so I'm sure I'm repeating what's been said, but your drunken, literary voice of Lex just blows me away. Gorgeous.
pure FORESHADOWING: Deathnifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:19 pm (UTC)
Oh, wow, thank you! *laughs* I have this mental image of a very drunk Lex with a glass of wine, waving one hand in the air as he writes the email and listens to -- oh, I don't know, Wagnerian opera or something, so literary is just the right word for the mood I was going for with him. *laughs again* I'm so glad you enjoyed this!
josephides: SV. Lex. Calixa.josephides on September 21st, 2004 02:54 pm (UTC)
*LOVES*
pure FORESHADOWING: breathlessnifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:20 pm (UTC)
Aww -- thank you! *snugs*
a velour panda: not impulsive - jess79cosmic on September 22nd, 2004 10:22 am (UTC)
So very. yes. *adores you and builds you a shrine*
pure FORESHADOWING: broken supermannifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:20 pm (UTC)
Ooh, a shrine, for me? That's so neat ! *bounces* Thank you!
Karen T: clex in a tv (Jojo)poohmusings on September 22nd, 2004 02:07 pm (UTC)
*refrains from slobbering all over you, a complete stranger*

Lovelovelove this fic. Your Clark voice is superb -- totally what I imagine a slightly older and slightly wiser Clark to sound like -- and the Lex voice in his email to Clark blew me away with its accuracy. Oh, and that ending? EEEEEEE! Thanks so much. :)
pure FORESHADOWING: absolut!nifra_idril on September 28th, 2004 04:23 pm (UTC)
Aww! *snugs* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Yay!
from: i need helpfromward on September 28th, 2004 06:07 pm (UTC)
Well, like one of my professors always say, good writing teaches you how to read. And heeee, the guy was talking mainly about James. So consider it a massive compliment. *g* This is a beautiful and enchanting piece. See, I just read it again from beginning to end when I came over only to read the last scene and feed my Metropolis CLex kink.
Raven: Baum by LaTraveninthewind on October 6th, 2004 11:57 am (UTC)
Oh, that hit the spot: angst plus satisfying resolution. Thanks!
gabriella: fightthefuture//oxoniensisgabby_silang on November 3rd, 2004 08:41 pm (UTC)
Hoooooooly shit, I love you. I don't know you, but I love you. This is. This. Did I mention "holy shit?" Because wow. That's about as articulate as it's going to get from my corner. Wow.