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07 July 2005 @ 07:33 pm
dS fic: catch my troubled head (1/1)  
dS fic: catch my troubled head
thanks to: lyra, pearl_o and estrella
Summary: “I want to stay,” Ray didn’t say.
“Please stay,” Fraser didn’t ask him.

catch my troubled headCollapse )
Current Mood: accomplishedaccomplished
Current Music: dead zone
sageness on July 8th, 2005 03:26 am (UTC)
Oh babe. You nailed it! I'm so thrilled to see you writing again!!

mr duck's embarrassed: nothing hotternigeltde on July 8th, 2005 04:15 am (UTC)
Oh! You killed me but then you fixed me again! This was truely gorgeous, moving stuff. Excellent work!
peter: DS perfectionpeter_neverland on July 8th, 2005 05:16 am (UTC)
“I want to stay,” Ray didn’t say.

“Please stay,” Fraser didn’t ask him.

“I’ll visit you,” Ray didn’t say.

“Promise you’ll come back,” Fraser didn’t ask him.

That was brilliant!
Divya: dS MotB by spuzz_divya_ on July 8th, 2005 07:39 am (UTC)
Oh my God. That was wonderful. Thank you for this.
little-b: welcome to canadabuzzylittleb on July 8th, 2005 11:50 am (UTC)
Ouch Ouch Ouchitty Ouch

That felt but good.
(Anonymous) on July 8th, 2005 12:15 pm (UTC)
Minor quibble for future editorial review
Inuvik is in the Northwest Territories; there is a Yukon Territory (singular but not plural). Loved reading this.
sjkasabisjkasabi on July 8th, 2005 01:05 pm (UTC)
Aww. That was sad and happy and lovely.
rahm, baby, rahm!elbomac on July 8th, 2005 01:41 pm (UTC)
Oh, so achy and wonderful. Just gorgeous. Thank you!
dinkit: fraser bluedinkit on July 8th, 2005 04:23 pm (UTC)
Oh, that hurt so much, and then it didn't anymore. =) Stupid stubborn Fraser and Ray!

And I loved how Beth was so smart (because that was *smart*, not being there in the morning) and as lonely and fucked up as Ray was, and still being something like a friend. *hugs Beth*

Thank you!
Myriad: Callum orgasms rock - geekwritermyriad69 on July 8th, 2005 04:36 pm (UTC)
This was fantastic. Stark and painful and perfect.
lynnmonsterlynnmonster on July 8th, 2005 07:45 pm (UTC)
Hooray! Nice Beth Botrelle encounter, btw, and I was pleased to see that Fraser's disbelief doesn't dispel completely after one statement from Ray. Love his pleas for Ray to stay.

*hugs you*
survenantesurvenante on July 8th, 2005 11:23 pm (UTC)
I love the feel of this story, the details, the happy ending, Beth Botrelle and the near-empty detachment building. But above all, I think it's the post-sex argument that totally seduced me. Great story...
John Stamos Took It Too Farbrooklinegirl on July 9th, 2005 12:17 am (UTC)
or, hi, I'll post this here where you will SEE it.
this works, this works, this TOTALLY works. My god. Why did no one ever THINK of Ray/Beth Boetrelle? *applauds like crazy* I adore this. It's desperate and sad and hopeful, in the exact right measures.
therentgirlstherentgirls on July 11th, 2005 04:28 am (UTC)
Lovely. Sweet and sad and oh-so-Romantic.
Gunbunny: doing laundryburntcopper on July 14th, 2005 11:17 pm (UTC)
:hugs them both: